tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-875059944011323761.post7492617197982558079..comments2015-04-01T07:05:09.925-07:00Comments on Clive Buccatti: “Let the redeemed of the Lord say so, whom he has redeemed from trouble” – Psalm 107:2Clive Buccattihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05599467743196163134noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-875059944011323761.post-75328541700652853422015-03-08T13:02:07.865-07:002015-03-08T13:02:07.865-07:00Tag. You are it. You should have some fun with thi...Tag. You are it. You should have some fun with this Clive.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03773853384157680922noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-875059944011323761.post-82985167117392507682015-03-04T06:24:56.294-08:002015-03-04T06:24:56.294-08:00Last two things:
-It was in that moment that I fi...Last two things: <br />-It was in that moment that I figured out what was so unnerving about my devastatingly inhuman dream. It wasn’t that it made me feel scared or concerned. It was that it didn’t. <br />That was my favorite sentence from you, ever. I read your blog frequently. <br />I also really enjoy the simplicity of "This is a bar, sweetheart, not a church."<br />-As far as a suggestion goes: Elaborate on how he got possessed! Tell some crazy ass story of how that occurred, and how you plan to act on it in the future. Is there any part of Clive that is still fighting lucifer inside of him or is he completely aligned with his goals?<br />-Also more on your motivation: I also think you are motivated to be joined with devil because you hate god for ruining your life. You blamed him for the unfortunate events that occurred, so satan possessed you and it was alright. You want to make war with God, an entity you seemingly love and hate at the same time. Lane Mastersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17621366231360560439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-875059944011323761.post-6997719204915041102015-03-04T06:20:20.350-08:002015-03-04T06:20:20.350-08:00Oh yeah... your motivation lies in your own mind. ...Oh yeah... your motivation lies in your own mind. I see you as someone lost in his head, struggling to battle his inner demons. You are so broken by the events of your life that now, sometimes you feel nothing at all and sometimes entirely too much. Emotion seems to be out of your control good sir. Lane Mastersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17621366231360560439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-875059944011323761.post-47484349375446254102015-03-04T06:17:26.742-08:002015-03-04T06:17:26.742-08:00Character development conflict present? motivation...Character development conflict present? motivations? connections to larger blog (events characters, motifs, settings)? larger narrative that is forming in the blog?<br />Clive, your character development, while somewhat all over the place, is really awesome. There are gaps in knowledge about Clive that make it perfect. He's ambiguous enough that people still find him super interesting, however, they are told enough to stay informed about his character. While I am not sure that you wanted his internal voice to be the devil from the beginning, I really love that and I thought it was clever. <br />As far as conflicts go, Clive's largest conflict lies within himself. He is unsure of his future and direction, and is battling the physical and literal devil/demons inside of him. I am interested to see where you take this blog!<br />I enjoy your connections to a larger blog, as in how you interacted with Catherine. I am not sure that's what you planned all along as usual, but you are really good at adapting and evolving your blog. I hope you and catherine have future interactions and motivations in the blog. <br />Your development of the motif, blue, was very good. I particularly enjoyed how you said that blue is the color of God. You also related it to your past, which was nice for the reader. I myself didn't even define what blue meant to me; I don't think it meant anything at all but it scared my character. And a blue subaru killed your family.... Interesting since a blue subaru was following everyone around! Maybe you can make something out of that!<br />-Yours truly,<br />LANE MASTERSONLane Mastersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17621366231360560439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-875059944011323761.post-49752339719240618292015-02-23T19:15:13.435-08:002015-02-23T19:15:13.435-08:00CANT YOU GIVE IT A REST? IM OBVIOUSLY HAVING A ROU...CANT YOU GIVE IT A REST? IM OBVIOUSLY HAVING A ROUGH DAYClive Buccattihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05599467743196163134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-875059944011323761.post-3989898856641003882015-02-23T18:37:57.232-08:002015-02-23T18:37:57.232-08:00Remember your place.Remember your place.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03773853384157680922noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-875059944011323761.post-33984970557988324582015-02-23T18:37:32.089-08:002015-02-23T18:37:32.089-08:00This angel was nothing more than a mere pawn in th...This angel was nothing more than a mere pawn in the game. Just like you. Just like these humans.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03773853384157680922noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-875059944011323761.post-84160895426083706742015-02-23T18:36:59.409-08:002015-02-23T18:36:59.409-08:00We both know that no such thing exists. Even among...We both know that no such thing exists. Even amongst the divine, there is a plan.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03773853384157680922noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-875059944011323761.post-68520741918827726072015-02-23T18:36:26.964-08:002015-02-23T18:36:26.964-08:00An unnecessary death? Really?An unnecessary death? Really?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03773853384157680922noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-875059944011323761.post-9085827564171760542015-02-23T18:36:06.736-08:002015-02-23T18:36:06.736-08:00Hello Clive.Hello Clive.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03773853384157680922noreply@blogger.com